修辞

1、 Her rich relatives rained birthday presents on her only son.

2、 Wrong ideas may hurm a man just like deseaes.

3、 Some words may be defaced by careless usage.

4、 The leaves are trembling in the cold wind.

5、 The storm was so angry that it wanted to destroy everything in its way.

6、 Many people bowed before Force,but eventually Force would surrender to Reason.

7、 Selfless people are like cows, which eat straw but produce milk.

8、 “What do you think of the roast duck?” “Not bad.”

9、 His friends praised his daughter’s performances to the skies.

10、 His writing is clear and clean.

11、 His unfriendly tongue surprised her.

12、 There is fertile soil for popular music in China today.

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Simile metaphor synecdoche metonymy personification overstatement understatement

改错

1、 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.

Our host,who had been a member of an exploration team working in Arctic,entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure.

2、 When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed,I had not heard him when he came back.Because I had been sleeping soundly.

When I woke up, I saw him asleep in bed,I had not heard him when he came back,because I had been sleeping soundly.

3、 Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay than other.

Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers ,and that was why he got higher pay than other.

4、 No student could answer the question ,even Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions ,was silent.

No student could answer that question. Even yao,who was usually quick in answering questions,was silent.

5、 Lin looks like Li,however,they are not related.

Lin looks like li;however,they are not related.

6、 The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle.His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.

The old man hunched forward,his head tilted at an angle,his eyes half closed,looking very sleepy.

7、 Their work was well planned ,everybody worked with great enthusiasm,thus, they overfulfilled their quota.

Their work was well planned,and everybody worked with great enthusiasm. As a result,they over fulfilled their quota.

8、 Mark Twain, a well-known American writer,whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.

The experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped to make Mark Twain,the American writer,to become so famous.

改进

1. She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.

The meeting started at ten o’clock,and she began to speak,she spoke very fast.

2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.

Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known English playwrights of the 20th century.

3. The houses were mere shanties,and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.

The houses were shanties,with rags stuffed in the cracks and boles.

4. I read the novel on the train,which did not interest me at all.

On the train I read the novel,which did not interest me at all.

5. A well-dressed man admitted us to the house,and we later learned that he was a thief.

We later learned that the well-dressed man who admitted us to the house was a thief.

6. I lost some important documents and found them three days later.the police had helped me.

The police helped me to find some important documents which I had lost three days before.

7. We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves ,and the prices were quite reasonable ,and a lot of customers were buying them.

A saleswoman greeted us when we entered the shop. We saw all kinds of shoes on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable. A lot of customerswere buying them.

8. Tell helen, if she is at home ,I wil come to see her.

Tell Helen,if she is at home,that I will come to see her.

9. Listening attentively ,a faulty sound was heard.

Listening attentively,he/she/I heard a faulty sound.

10. On entering the room,no one was seen.

L entered the room and saw no one.

11. Fred is energetic,capable ,and a man you can rely on.

Fred is energetic and capable. You can rely on him.

12. The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.

The children promised to be careful and return home early.

13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he exposes in them.

Dickens’novels offer no solution to the social injunstices exposed to them.

14. My watch is either fast or yours is slow.

Either my watch is fast,or your watch is slow.

15. Glancing out of the window,a beautiful view attracted my attention.

A beautiful view out of the window attracted my attention.

16. He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.

He finished reading almost ten books during the vacation.

17. If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.

If you are interested in paiting,you can take a course at the evening school.

18. She said that she would come if she could,but not to wait for her.

She said that she would come if she could,but we needn’t wait for her.

19. To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.

To tell my friends the good news,I posted the letter at once.

20. I will go to the lecture,for I like his poems.

I will go to the lecture,because I like the speaker’poems.

改写句子

1、 Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.

2、 The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends.

3、 Last night was a wild night.the thunder roared. The wind blew a gale.the rain fell in torrents.

4、 There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night.

5、 He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.

6、 We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.

7、 The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.

8、 There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners.

9、 The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a fomous pianist.

10、 Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France.

11、 She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.

12、 The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they were thought to be Egyptians.

13、 The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.

14、 It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. They dotted a hillside.

15、 He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.

1. Xu ,who comes from a working-class family,enrolled in college last fall.

2. The dean issued a bulletin,saying/which said the library would remain open on weekends.

3. Last night was a wild night,with the thunder roaring , the wind blowing a gale and the rain falling in torrents.

4. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night,for there are icicles on the trees.

5. Twelve years later he returned to his hometown,and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.

6. Although we have made some progress,we still have a long way to go.

7. The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.

8. On board the plane there were over two hundred passengers,about one third of whom were foreigners.

9. The girl,whose mother was a fomous pianist,began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.

10. In 1769,when Napoleon was born in Cousica,the island had just been acquired by France.

11. A stormy applause broke forth the moment ,she appeared on the stage.

12. Once thought to be Egytians,the gypsies are really a nomadic people from India,who migrated into Europe.

13. Young and inexperienced,the new workers are eagere to learn from the veteran workers.

14. There was a poor quarter on the hillside with a lot of small huts withmud walls and staw roofs.

15. On hearing that his father was illl,be was anxious to go home to see him,so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.

1. The oplum war broke out in 1840.

2. Their library has more books than ours.

3. He returned home after graduating from college.

4. We planned to meet before sunrise in the morning.

5. The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.

6. He was asked to repeat the sentence.

7. I play badminton as well as my brother.

8. To his friends his attitude was a puzzle.

9. These watermelons are large and sweet.

10. He did not tell the truth.

11. A number of students want to join the drama club.

12. He was kind enough to let me share his umbrella.

13. The whole class elected zhao their representative.

14. I am taking two courses: world history and geography.

15. The plane cireled the airport for about ten minutes and then disappeared.

16. I mean that he has not done his work well enough.

17. I would like you to consider whether you would like to publish your recent article on women scientists in china in our journal.

18. As he had missed many lectures,he knew that he might fail the exam,

19. You must work out an outline for your paper,and then you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.

20. In that country,violent deaths occur every day.

21. He is not only a good pianist,but also a good singer.

22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.

23. Students are not allowed to take books out of this reading room.

24. According to the speaker,the respongsibility system has helped to increase production.

25. One reason why people are well informed in this city is that there are many newspapers easily bought or subscribed to.

26. Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.

27. There are so many workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.

28. There are about 50 patients in this ward,and many are being given acupuncture treatment.

29. He is called james williams.

30. Whatever he does,he works seriously and does his best.

1. Huang ,the tallest man of the team,is over two meters tall.

2. After going bankrupt,social position,reputation and friends,even life itself,were no longer interesting to him.

3. Unexpectedly,he decided to take the job .

4. Under no circumstances will china be the first to use nuclear weapons.

5. Of the twenty students in the class,yang alone can do the work.

6. As a result of reform and opening-up policy during the past 30 years,china has changed a great deal.

7. According to newspaper reports,she was the first chinese woman who had won a gold medal for figure skating in an international contest.

8. While serving as a cabin boy on the ship,robert made an attempt to do all the things that the sailor members of the crew usually did.

9. Among his neighbors was the famous writer,mrs.jones.

10. The patient help of the teachers enabled the students to make good progress.

11. She often helps to improve her comrades’pronunciation.

12. Although there are few mistakes in the language,the composition is not very good,because the content is not interesting.

1.i got up a little later than usual on Sunday morning. After washing and a quick breakfast. I started going to town to buy the dictionary recommended by the teacher. At the school gate I saw li ping and ask him if he was going to town too. He said he was ,so we decided to go together. All the buses were crowded, and we had to wait for a long time at the bus stop before we could get on one. An hour later,we got off at a busy street where there were three bookstores. We went to the first one and didn’t find the dictionary. In the second one we were told the dictionary had been sold out. It was in the third that we finally bought the dictionary. After that li ping and I went to other stores where we bought various things. We returned to school just in time for lunch.

2. ludwig van beethovenm,the major composer of th 19th century, overcame many personal miseries to achieve artistic greatness. He was born in bonn,Gemany in 1770,and first shudied music with a court organist. His father,who was given to heavy drinking,was excessively strict. After his mother died,when he was appointed deputy court organist at a surprisingly early age, and he played the harpsichord and the viola at the same time . in the 1792 he went to vicnna to study music under haydn. While remaining unmarried all his life,he was frequently troubled by financial worries. He was continually plagued by ill health. The worst happened in 1818 when an ear intechon led to his deamess. However,his writing of music continued in spite of his handicap. Goethe said that beetboven had an”untamed personality”. This may have been true,but his music shows great discinline and control.

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