2020年考研英语作文预测：因材施教
发布时间：2023-09-22 22:02:00
2020年考研英语作文预测：因材施教Theduckmother,whoisanxiousandenergetic,isbeggingthemonkeyteachertoteachherchildrentheapproachofclimbingtree,whichgive(改为giveshimafright.Conspicuously,thatisadelicious(用词不当，delicious一般用来形容美食，故应去掉ironic(改为anironicdepictionconcerningblindeducation,(加and，句子之间用连词连接aphenomenon(句子缺谓语，加ispervasiveincontemporarysociety.Thisoverwhelming,occupywithvariouskindsofirrationalbehaviorsoverchildren(句子表意不清，建议改为Thisoverwhelminglyvariouskindofirrationalbehaviors,led(改为lead，句子时态应保持一致ustoconcludethattheblindeducationismoreofadevastationtochildren’sfacultiesthanareasonablepractice.Thiskindofaimlesseducationkids(加are，beexposedto为固定短语exposedtotendtobein(去掉，beexposedto后面直接跟宾语domesticsituation,by,(此处by是什么意思?unfortunately,theirownparents,whoexertgreatpressureonchildren’salreadyover-burdenedsmallshoulder.(改为children’sover-burdenedsmallshouldersMoreridiculously,manyparentsknowthatcountlessflawsareconsistinthiswayofeducationandyetmostdidlitter(改为little，litter意为“垃圾”tochangeit.Thereareupsettingparallelstoday,asparentsonewaveafteranotherforcetheirlittlekids(加to,forcesb.Todosth.participateinvariouskindsofout-classcourses(“课外课程”可表达为extra-curriculumcourses(注意句子顺序，改为asparentsforcetheirlittlekidstoparticipateinvariouskindsofextra-curriculumcoursesonewaveafteranother,asaresult(去掉,theirvulnerableheartbecome(改为willbeoccupiedwith
depressionandanxious.Theclearmessageisthatweshouldgetmovingtoprotectourchildren.Firstly,suitableatmospheremustbecreated,whereourkidcangrowfreelyinharmonious,byus,especiallytheparents(表述不清新，建议将此部分去掉.Moreover,theauthoritiesshouldchargewiththeobligationoffashioningtheideathateducationentailsmorethansimplyteachchildrennumerousdisciplines.Rather,makingfulldisplayof
