写作名师点题：

这个题目属于argumentation辩论型题目。题干中包含discuss both sides,则必须使用对称式结构。从思路上来说，比校难写，不容易找出理由。可以围绕以下思路:人们现在的工作、学习压力大，没时问运动:人们在空闲时一般都看电视、上网.不做运动等。
 

雅思写作高分范文：

 
A problem of modem societies is the declining level of health in the general population. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle. However, there are some people who doubt whether the solution would have effects.
 
Advocates of this solution believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best way to improve the weU-being of people. First of all, nowadays people have to devote more time and energy to their careers and therefore they are too busy to spare time for physical exercises. If there were easy-to-reach local sports facilities, they would be more likely to take part in physical activities
 
regularly. Another reason is that today's sedentary lifestyle means that physical activity is no longer part of people's leisure time. If more sports facilities were offered, doing a variety of sports would be much more attractive than just sitting in front of a screen every evening.
 
However, there are some reasons why the solution may have little effect. In the first place, interest in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract those who are already fit, not those who need them badly. What we should do is to help children develop a positive attitude to exercise at an early age. In the second place, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. For example, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving the public transport would help because it takes a longer time to walk to the bus stop than to the car.
 
In my opinion, increasing the number of sports facilities may not have the desired results. People should be encouraged to form the habit of doing regular physical exercises when they are young. In addition, some better approaches may assist in improving people's health.
 

作文结构分析：

根据题目要求，此范文使用了对称式结构，文章分为四段:第一段介绍题目背景并简述双方观点:第二段对同意这种做法的观点进行了分析，并说明了两个理由:第三段时反对这个做法的观点进行了分析，也阐述了两个理由;第四段总结全文，提出自己的观点。
 

亮点词汇：

亮点语句：

1. If there were easy-to-reach local sports facilities, they would be more likely to take part in physical activities regularly.

如果有方便的运动设施，他们更可能会定期参加体育活动。

1. In the first place, interest in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract those who are already fit, not those who need them badly.

第一，对运动的兴趣不是普逃的，增加的设施可能只会吸引那些已经很健康的人，而不是那些最需要这些设施的人。

1. For For example, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.

比如，对高热量食物、烟草和酒施加高税，因为过多摄入这些会导致不良的健康状况。

写作名师点题：

在统计数据类图表作文中.较少出现四幅图的考查形式.本题是四幅饼图.而 2013年2月2日的考试中给出的是四幅柱状图，剑7Test 4也是四幅饼图。此类图表作文有一定的共同点.都足用两幅图说明一件事情，另外两幅图说明另外一件事情，而且两组图之间也存在一定的联系。四幅图.信息多，在写作时容易超字数。解决办法是，每幅图都要描述，但不要描述得太详细，而且要阐述各图之间的关系。
 

雅思写作高分范文：

The four pie charts illustrate information on the ages of the population of Yemen-and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
We can see from the first two pie charts that in Yernen, people under 14 years occupied the first
position in 2000, while people from 15 to 59 years will have the highest percentage in 2050. There will be a growth in the percentage of people from 15 to 59 years and people over 60 years from 2000 to 2050. However, the percentage of people under 14 years will decrease over the 50 years.
It can be seen from the second two pie charts that in Italy, people from 15 to 59 years have the highest percentage in 2000 and 2050, and the percentage of people over 60 years is higher than that  of people under 14 years. There will be a rise in the percentage of people over 60 years from 2000 to 2050. However, the 50 years will witness a decrease in the percentage of people
under 14 years and from 15 to 59 years.
In 2000, in terms of people under 14 years, the percentage of Yemen was higher than those of Italy. However, in 2050, as for population over 60 years, the percentage of Yemen will be much lower than that of Italy.
 

作文结构分析：

  范文由四段组成：第一段为引言段，主要介绍该图标展示的是什么方面的信息；第二段对前两幅饼图（也就是也门的人口比例）进行描述；第三段对后两幅饼图（也就是意大利的人口比例）进行描述；最后一段对两组饼图(也就是两个国家的人口比例)进行比较归纳。
 

亮点词汇：

第一段：
Illustrate 以图表的形式说明
Prediction 预测
第二段：
Occupy 占据
Growth 增加，上升
Decrease 减少，下降
第三段：
Rise 增加，上升
Witness 目睹，见证
第四段：
In term of 在…方面
As for 关于，至于
 

亮点语句：

1. We can see from the first two pie charts that in Yemen, people under 14 years occupied the first position in 2000, while people from 15 to 59 years will have the highest percentage in 2050.
从前两幅饼图我们可以看到，在也门，14岁以下的人口在2000年占据第一位，但是在2050年15岁到59岁的人口将占最高比例。
2.there will be a growth in the percentage of people from 15 to 59 years and people over 60 years from 2000 to 2050.
从2000年到2050年，15岁到59岁和60岁以上的人口比例会上升。
3.however, the percentage of people under 14 years will decrease over the 50 years.
然而，在这50年间，14岁以下的人口比例将会下降。

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