高中英语英语写作素材积累

要提高写作能力，只知道写作技巧还不行。就像一个建楼房的人，知道怎样建房，甚至图纸都设计好了，但是没有材料，怎能建房呢？正所谓“仓里有粮，心中不慌”。所以在平时的训练中可选用以下的学习方法来使文章的句子合理流畅，内容生动充实，过渡自然，观点明确，条理清晰，语言优美。

（1）、准备一个写作档案袋，把平时遇到的好文章、好句子和好词组剪下来放到袋子里，定期进行记忆整理。

（2）、加工仿写美文。

学生可建立个人的范文库，根据中学阶段对写作的基本要求进行模仿性写作练习。此外，当发现一些在内容上或文字上都非常好的句、篇时，如一些谚语，学生应该把它们抄下来背会并学会在自己的写作中适当运用。

（3）、善于归纳。

学习过程中要注意归纳总结。学生可以把一些常用于写作中表示各种句子关系的词或词组及一些语篇衔接标志（如连接词）进行归纳。区分它们的用法，并对不同关系的连接词进行归类，这样写作时可信手拈来。如递进关系（besides,what’smore,inaddition,moreover,tomakemattersworse,what’sworse,furthermore等）；转折关系（however,but,while,inspiteof,otherwise等）；个人观点（inmyopinion,personally,asfarasI’mconcerned,asforme,frommypersonalpointofview等）；总结（inshort,inaword,onthewhole,allinall,tosumupbriefly,ingeneral,inconclusion等）其它（foronething,foranother,lastbutnotleast,eachcoinhastwosides,accordingto,compareto,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,asamatteroffact等）。

（4）、建立个人写作模式，并逐渐形成自己的写作风格。

（5）、关注重点语言知识和一些比较地道的英语表达方式，并把它们进行整理，学会使用。（如failtodosth,sthoccurredtosb,available,obtain等的使用）

（6）、学会扩展句子。如分析句子的主干，中间加一个定语从句进去，或改成名词性从句，或改成状语从句、并列句还有非谓语的使用等等。

书面表达中的高级结构

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们高三英语教师在讲评书面表达时，经常告诉学生说，书面表达要得高分，就得有高级句型和高级词汇；但很多同学在写书面表达时，总认为高级句型和高级词汇很神秘，高不可及。其实，未必如此！通过研读一些优秀的学生习作和历年高考书面表达的范文，我们发现，很多所谓的高级句型和高级词汇正是我们老师反复讲解和训练的。下面列举一些常见且高级的词汇和句型，供同学们参考。

一、高级词汇

1．occur替换thinkof

SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→

Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.

Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.

2．devote替换spend

Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→

Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.

3．seek替换want/lookfor

Theysought(wanted)tohidethemselvesbehindthetrees.

4．average替换ordinary

I’manaverage(ordinary)student.

5．but替换very

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.

6．seat替换sit

Onhiswaytoschool,hefoundanoldladyseated(sitting)bytheroad,lookingworried.

7．suppose替换should

Heissupposedto(should)havedrivenmoreslowly.

8．appreciate替换thank

Thankyouverymuchforyouhelp.→

Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch./Yourhelpismuchappreciated.

9．thecase替换true

Idon’tthinkitisthecase(true).

10．on替换assoonas

Assoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→

Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch..

11．dueto替换becauseof

Hearrivedlatedueto(becauseof)thestorm.

12．cover替换walk/read

Aftercovering(walking)10miles,weallfelttired.

13．contributeto替换behelpful/useful

PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→

PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.

14．roundthecorner替换comingsoon/nearby

①Thesummervacationisroundthecorner(coming).Doyouhaveanyplans?

②LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner(nearby).

15．cometolight替换discover

Thefamilyweresopleasedwhentheydiscoveredthelostjewels.→

Thefamilyweresopleasedwhenthelostjewelscametolight.

16．haveaball替换haveagoodtime/enjoyoneself

Aftervisitingtheworkshop,wewentbacktoschool.Everyoneofushadaball(hadagoodtime).

17．comeupwith替换thinkof

Jackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwith(thinksof)newideas.

18．setaside替换save

Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.(20KK天津卷)

19．beof+n.替换adj.

Theproductsareofhighquality(verygood)andaresoldeverywhereinChina.

20．referto替换talkabout/of,mention

Theprofessoryoureferredto(talkedabout)isveryfamous.

21．cannotbut/cannothelpbut替换havetodo

Icouldnotbut(hadto)gohome.

22．moreoftenthannot替换usually

Moreoftenthannot(Usually),themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.

23．lest替换sothat/inorderthat

IwrotedownhistelephonenumbersothatIwouldnotforgetit.→

IwrotedownhistelephonenumberlestI(should)forgetit.

24．belongforsth./belongtodosth.替换wanttodosth./wishfor

Iwanttoseeyouverymuch.→

Iamlongtoseeyou.

25．becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto替换beinterestedin

Heiscaughtupin(veryinterestedin)collectingstamps.

26．morethan替换very

①I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→

I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.(NMET20KK)

②IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.(20KK全国卷)

27．perfect(ly)替换good/verywell

Hespeaksperfect(good)English./HespeaksEnglishperfectly(verywell).

28．dosba/thefavor替换help

Wouldyoupleasedomethefavor(helpme)toturndowntheradio?

29．theotherday替换afewdaysago

TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.(NMET1997)

30．inthecourseof替换during

Inthecourseof(During)themountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.

31．themajorityof替换most

Themajorityof(Mostof)theintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.

32．consistof替换bemadeupof

Ourclassconsistsof(ismadeupof)50students.

33．bewornout替换betired/broken

①Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout(tired).

②Myshoesarewornout(broken).Pleasebuymeanewpair.

34．becomeof替换happen

Whatdothinkhasbecomeof(happenedto)him?

35．attendto替换lookafter

36．onconditionthat替换aslongas

37．nevertheless替换however

38．expressone’ssatisfactionwith替换besatisfiedwith

39．sparenoeffortstodo替换tryone’sbesttodo

40．manya替换many

41．berushedoffone’sfeet替换bebusyindoing

42．ahandfulof替换alittle/some

43．meanwhile替换atthesametime

44．gettoone’sfeet替换standup

45．beneath替换under

46．occasionally替换sometimes/onceinwhile

47．forinstance替换forexample

48．seldom替换notoften

49．wealthy替换rich

50．amazing替换surprising

51．asamatteroffact替换infact

二、写作高级短语积累

1.becloselyrelatedto…与…息息相关

2.beessentialtosb对某人来说必不可少

3.inasocietywithmorecompetitionsandchallenges/inacompetitivesociety

4.feelfrustrated(挫折的）/discouraged

5.aprecious(宝贵的)experience

6.raise/arousetheawarenessof…

7.acquireknowledgeandskills学习知识和技能

8.agrowing/increasingtendency

9.haveadesireforsth/todosth

10.putsthintopractice

11.bekeenon…热衷于…

12.broadenone’shorizons开阔眼界

13.alargevarietyof/awiderangeof…

14.makeone’sdreamcometrue

15.layasolid/firm/stablefoundationfor/in…为…/在…方面打下坚实的基础

16.listentoteachersattentively

17.makeapracticalplan

18.holdthestrongbeliefthat…

19.I’mconfident/I’mconvincedthat…

20.withironwillandperseverance

21.pursueone’sdream追逐梦想

22.arouseone’spassionfor…唤起对…的热情

23.resistthetemptationofgoodfood

24.changeone’soriginalmind

25.sparenoefforttodosth不遗余力做…

26.redoubleone’seffort加倍努力

27.leaveadeepimpressiononsb

28.turntosbforhelp/advice

29.relieve/lessen/reduce/easeone’sburden

30.withtimegoingby=astimegoesby

31.cherish/treasure/valueourlives

32.varyfrompersontoperson

33.aboardingschool寄宿制学校

34.Whatsurprisedmemostwasthat…

35.causesevereconsequences(后果)

36.paytheirtuition/schoolfees/schooling

37.physicallyandmentally

38.Someinfavorofitthinkthat….,whileothersareagainstit,holdingtheopinionthat…

39.Successstemsfromhardworkasitcanhelpusaccomplishthegoalwe’restrivingfor.

40.establishaspecialfundtohelpthepoor

41.itsnegativeaspect/impactisalsoobvious.

42.motivatesbtodosth

43.buryoneselfintostudy埋头学习

44.ourdeterminationandefforts

45.expressmygratitudetohersincerely

46.bestrictwithsbinsth

47.achievethefinalvictory

48.encounter/facesomedifficulties

49.neglectthedisadvantages

50.Withthegreateffortswe’vemade,…

51.enhance/improvehisabilityofsinging

52.beoptimisticabout

三、高级句型结构

◆It句型

①Itwillbe+sometime+before…

Itwon’tbelongbeforehumansvisittheMars.

②Itis+adj./n.+forsbtodosth.

Itisveryimportantforustolearncomputerwell,becauseithaschangedourlifesomuch.

HesaidsinceitwasanewmodelinChina,itwasimpossibletofixitwithouttherightspareparts.（20KK年湖北卷）

③Itis+被强调部分+that…

1)ItiswhatYangLiweihasdonethatencouragesusalot.

2)Thosewholikereadingextensivelysayitisthroughreadingthatwegetourknowledge.

◆more…thananyother表示最高级

Amongtheoptionalcourses,spokenEnglishandcomputerstudyaremorepopularthananyoneelse.

◆名词从句

①Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.(20KK全国卷Ⅲ)

②Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.

◆（非限制性）定语从句

①TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.→

TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.(NMET20KK)

②Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.(20KK北京卷)

◆分词结构

①Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.(NMET20KK)

②We’llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.(20KK全国卷Ⅱ)

③Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.（20KK辽宁卷）

④BorninAmerican,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.（20KK年湖南卷）

◆with结构

①Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.

②Hewascarryingabedrollandalargebagonhisshoulder,withalargesuitcaseinhislefthand.

◆倒装句

①Thelibraryistotheeastoftheteachingbuilding.→

Eastoftheteachingbuildingisthelibrary.

②Althoughwearetired,wearehappy.→

Tiredasweare,wearehappy.

③Onlyinthiswaycanhegrowtobeausefulman.(20KK上海卷)

④Mayallyourdreamscometrue!Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse.!（20KK年湖南卷）

◆被动语态

①Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.(NMET20KK)

②Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.(20KK全国卷Ⅳ)

③Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.(20KK江苏卷)

◆巧妙的改写

（1）．Only改成noonebut

OnlyTompassedtheexamlastweek.→NoonebutTompassedtheexam.

（2）．assoonas…改成Nosooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/ThemomentNosoonerhadwearrivedatthecinemathanthefilmstarted.

（3）．havesb/sthdo/done

Thegirlwasknockedoffherbicycleandhadherlegbroken(herlegwasbroken.).

（4）．变换插入语的位置

①However,theysuggestfeesshouldbechargedlow.→

Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.(NMET20KK)

②Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.→

Thisisagoodchanceforyou,Ithink,toshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.(20KK全国卷Ⅰ)

(5).用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei,whoissevenyearsold,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.→

Meimei,agirlofthirteen,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.(20KK上海卷)

Shakespeare,asonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld.（20KK年湖南卷）

◆其它

（1）注重句子的开头

①用with复合结构开头

Withthesunsettinginthewest,wehadtowavegoodbyetotheworkers.

Withhishelp,we'velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblems.（20KK年湖南卷）

Withthefunctionsofinserting,deleting,movingandcopying,itenablesustoedittest,browsewebpageanddownloadwhatwewant.（20KK年江苏卷）

②用非谓语动词形式开头

ⅰ）InordertoimproveourEnglish,ourschoolheldanEnglishcontest.

ⅱ）Walkingtowardsthecinema,hemetaforeigner.

（2）长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）

◆◆相关过渡语

1).表示时间顺序:first,then,afterwards,meanwhile,later，firstofall,finally,atlast…

2).表示空间顺序:near,nextto,farfrom,infrontof,ontheleft,ononeside…

3).表示比较、对照:like,unlike,suchas,but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,nevertheless,otherwise…

4).表示因果关系:because,for,asaresult,therefore,thus…

5).表示递进关系:besides,what’smore,whatwasworse,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,ontopof…

6).表示并列关系:and,aswellas,also…

7).表示总结性:ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,tosumup,inbrief,toconclude…

读写任务素材积累

一、面对挑战的感悟

Looking back onthis,Irealizethatwhatever challenges I am faced with,Iwillspare no effortandnevergiveup.I’msuretoachievefinalvictoryandbecomewhat I should be.

二、怎样看待司机的行为？

Afterreadingthepassage,Ifeltveryangrywiththedriver.It waswhathedidthatdidshockme.Ican’tbelievethedriverissocruel.Generally speaking,theresponsibilityofabusdriveristoservepeople.However,thedriverisshort ofessentialoccupational morality.Having knownthewoman’sarmwasstuckinthebusdoor,hecontinuedtodrivehisbus.What an evil-minded driver!

三、对交友的看法

In my view,it takes time to buildgoodrelationshipwithothers.Youcan’texpect to becomegoodfriendswithsomeonesoon afteryoumeethim.Youalsocan’texpecttobecomegoodfriendswithothersifyoudonotspendtimewiththem.

四、对心理问题的看法

As far as I’m concerned,mental problemsareseriousproblemsbothinuniversitiesandmiddleschools.Ibelievephysical and mental healthismoreimportantthangoodgrades.Therefore,parentsandteachersshouldfirstpay attention tostudents’feelings.Only whentheyfeelitfuntostudy,can they learntheirlessonswell.

五、对网络教育的看法

Personally,Iappreciatethisnewformofeducation.Itcanprovidedifferentlearnerswithmoreflexiblewaystolearn.Most of all,withonlineeducation,wecanabsorbthelatestknowledge.

六、对“自我表现与谦虚”的看法

For my part,goodcommunication,includingpresentingone’sachievementsandadvantagesproperlytoothers,canlead to success.Inmodernsociety,blowing one’s own trumpet(喇叭)canhelpothersknowwhat a person is good at,whichmaybeanexamplefor them to follow.Sowhat counts mostisthatone’sconfidencemustbetrueofone’srealcase.

ToChinesepeople,modesty is a virtue,butbeingtoomodestmaysometimescauseotherstothinkyouaregoodatnothing.Moreover,modestydoesn’tnecessarilymeanhidingone’sownstrongpointsorkeepingsilent.Onemustlearntosellhimselfat the right time and enjoy his proud moments.Therefore,blowingone’strumpetandmodesty,in my opinion,canbecombinedandbalanced.

七、态度决定一切的启示

Differentattitudeslead todifferentresults.Take XiaoHuafor example,He’smyclassmate.Healwaysputs his heart intostudy,sohehasbecomea top studentinourclass.With his diligence and concentration,he’s bound tosucceedinthe entrance examination.However,XiaoLinevercaresabouthisstudyandturns a deaf ear totheteachers’advice.As a result,hefalls far behindothersinhisstudy.

八、对…行为的看法

As for me,Marryisreallygreatbecauseshe’sreadytodo…that seems very small.Maybewhat she is doingisverycommon in others’ eyesbutitwillplay an important role inourdailylife.

九、目标的重要性（看法）

Iwas greatly inspiredbysuchastoryasitmakesmerealizethepowerofagoalinshaping one’s successandgivesmestrengthtopursue my goaldespite the hardshipsI’m to go through.

In my opinion,goalsareimportantinourlife.To begin with,asgoalsoftenenables us to be positive to ups and downsinourlife.Moreover,bearinggoalsin mind,we’re less likely tobedistracted fromourwaytosuccess.Finally,asgoalsarewhat we’re longing for,theythuscanmotivate us to strive for greater achievements,makingourlifemorefulfilling(令人满意的).

十、对考验的感受

FromthestoryI’velearnedthatthe trials of lifeareof great importanceinourgrowth.As the saying goes,“Nocross,nocrown(不经历风雨怎么见彩虹).” Only by facing and overcomingdifficultiesinourlife can we growuphappily and healthily.

十一、对中学生活的感受

As for me,a student from the country,what I do every dayistodevote myself torealizingmydreamofattending a key university.SoIseldomhavetimetodooutdooractivities.Anyway,I’vebecomemoreindependentandasastudentofboarding school,myexperiencehasbecomeabenefit in my future college life.

十二、有关命运转折点的启示

ThepassageinspiredmegreatlyasIcometoknowthatthehappinessoflifelies inourownhands.Althoughhewashopelessinanysportatschool,Hedidn’tgiveup.Despite whatotherssayabouthim,hemade up his mindtoimprovehimselfpush his body to the limit.With his determination and perseverance,hemade a differenceinhislife.

十三、对街头食品的看法

As far as I’m concerned,Ioftenpurchasesomestreetfoodon my way toschoolinthemorningbecauseit is very convenient tome.Asastudent,Ican’tspendmuchtimewaitingoreatinginarestaurant.It is well-known thatstreetfoodisverypopularincitiesandtownsbecausetheyaretasty,quickandcheap,which attract a large number of customerseveryday.Mostofthemaresobusywiththeirstudyandwork thattheycan’tspare much time toenjoytheirmeals.

十四、如何更好地鼓励孩子学习

Toget kids motivated to learn,Ithinkweshouldnottreateverychildin the same way.Tosomekids, oral praise is essential.Don’tsave the praiseforonlythetopscore.If possible,involve other adults inpraisingthem.However,thismethodmaynotwork wellwithotherkids.Maybewhat is more important to themistowatchamovieorgoonatriptogetherwiththeirparents.It just depends.

十K五、如何适应大学生活

As far as I’m concerned,collegelifediffers frommiddleschoollifealot.SoIthinktheidealuniversitylifeshouldhelpmeget well prepared forsociety,including obtaining academic knowledge.

IthinkIwill take an active part inallkindsofactivities,as well asstudyhardtoachievemyidealuniversitylife.

十六、建设生态学校，你该做点什么？

To build our school an Eco-school,firstImusttellmyschoolmatesabouttheimportanceofenvironmental protection.Thenwecanstart from doing some small things,suchascollectingusedandsavingwater.Weshouldalwaysremember our responsibilitiesandchangetheenvironmentstep by step.

十七、离家出走建议

In my eyes,trustandcommunicationareof great importance.Whydon’tyoutrytobreak the icebytalkingtoyourmotheraboutyouremotions?Secondly,knowhow to calm yourself down when you’re upset.Maybeyouneedtorunaroundoutside,listentomusic,ordraw.Do whatever you need to dotofeelbetter.

Youcanalsogetsomehelpfromidealfriends—someonelikeyourteacher,orneighbor,who you can depend on to support and help you.

十八、可以采取哪些措施解决污染问题

Manypeoplehavebecome aware of the importance of environmental protectionbutothersstillhaven’t,sosome measures should still be takentosolveenvironmentalproblems.Forexample,ourgovernmentshouldeducate people to realize the seriousness of the environmental problemsandtoprotectournaturalresourcesin an environmentally friendly way.Only wheneveryoneknowstheimportanceoftheenvironmentalprotectioncan we have a better and cleaner worldtolivein!

十九、怎样应对同伴压力

Firstofall,sincethewholeworldisfull of peer pressure,wehavetoknowthatit is not easy for us to avoid it.Secondly, find out the truth about somethingandyou’llreallyfeelbetter

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