My favorite star

My favourite star is a girl called Sun Yanzi, who is well received（深受欢迎） by many people from all over the world.

Sun Yanzi has a great voice and has sung many impressive（令人印象深刻的） songs. She is always full of energy and confidence（自信）, whether on the stage or in her real life. However,what has impressed me most is her involvement（参与） in charity（慈善） work. We all think highly of(高度赞扬) what she has done to help people in need. She helps poor children go to school and the blind（盲人） see the world again. That’s why I have chosen her as my idol（偶像）. I feel very proud of （为…而骄傲）her.

Her sincerity（诚实）, simplicity(朴实) and keeping positive（积极的） every day has influenced（影响） me greatly and it will continue in the future. From her, I have learned not only how to appreciate （欣赏）beautiful music, but also how to be a useful person and help make the world a better place for others as well as ourselves. In order to make my dreams come true, I will work harder to have a career（职业） of my own. I’m sure that one day I will have the ability（能力） to help people in the world to live better. I will do my best to help others.

编辑点评：作文以结构清晰语言流畅、平实，富有感情地表达了作者对偶像孙燕姿的喜爱，写她的善良和朴实打动了作者，她，用歌声告诉了作者关于成长的故事。在作者成长路上，孙燕姿的陪伴让他有了前进的动力。也许，这就是偶像的力量。

英语作文：明星My favorite star