说明：1.【】此括号内部就是表示可以有，也可以无，字数不够的时候最好加上。

2.黑体字并且没有红色下划线的就完全不用改动。

3. 红色字体下面有下划线的即根据具体的事件或者要求转换成自己的。

4. 一定要注意写信的格式要求，否则得不高分。

投诉信

投诉信：投诉商品（服务）质量/

写作要点：

第一段：第一句自我介绍（也可以没有），第二句直接指出投诉的原因

第二段：第一句投诉原因一；（衔接词）第二句投诉原因二；也可以有投诉原因三；第三句：解决措施一；第四句：处理措施二；

第三段：第一句：希望尽快解决；第二句：希望得到回复

Dear Sir or Madam:

【I am a regular customer(自我介绍) who has bought an electronic dictionary from your online store the other day】.I venture (冒昧) to write to present my awful grumbles that there are something wrong with my newly-bought electronic dictionary.

There are several factors accounting for my complaint in the following part.

The most critical reason leading to this letter is that the battery goes bad from time to time,which seriously upsets my schedule and affects my study.Worse still, the buttons are too small that it’s rather challenging to get the one I want once.In light of the aforementioned problem（针对以上问题）, it is advisable for you to take the following measures. For one thing ...... For another...

I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible.Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

道歉信

写作要点：

第一段：一句话（也可以两句）：就某事表达歉意

第二段：事件细节及补救措施：第一句写：事件的次要细节；第二句：主要细节； 第三句：由于疏忽（原因），给您带来不便；第四句：如果不是我的错误您就不会....（造成的损失或者不便）。第五句：我希望用具体某种措施补救/挽回损失

第三段：第一句再次表达歉意

道歉一般是：东西丢失/答应的活动无法参加/东西无法按期归还/

Dear Anne,

I am excessively [ɪk'sesɪvlɪ] sorry（非常抱歉） to tell you that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon and trust that you will be able to understand.

Several days ago, I borrowed it when I lived in your house.（叙述事情） Unfortunately, just now I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you（导致这件事发生的原因和结果）. Due to the lapse [læps](疏忽) of my attention,you must have felt inconvenience .But for it(如果不是我的疏忽), you would have used it.I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible（事情补救措施）. If necessary, I will compensate [ˈkɒmpenseɪt](补偿) for any troubles it may cause. If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.

I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

Sincerely yours,

LiMing

邀请信

写作要点：

第一段：一句话 邀请某人做某事

第二段：第一句：描述事件+对方优势/优点；第二句：希望你参加如下活动；第三句：活动要求1；第四句：活动要求2；第五句：总结相信对方对自己有帮助。

第三段：请收件人做出反馈（确认是否过来）

一般邀请某人做演讲(报告)/参加某项活动（婚礼/party/生日）/

Dear Xiaobao,

[I’m a senior from department of computer science.] (双方不认识简要自我介绍)。[I am writing on behalf of(代表) the English Department(协会/组织) to invite you to give a lecture [ˈlektʃə(r)](演讲) in our college.

It’s my great pleasure to write to you to present my sincere [sɪnˈsɪə(r)]  invitation for you to the contest.[There are several reasons illustrating [ˈɪləstreɪtig] my invitation in the following part. ](字数不够加上)。

[The most critical reason leading to this invitation is that] we will hold the English contest to improve our speaking ability on April 5 that Room 101 and we need a judge of authority, that’s why we come for you. Moreover, many participants wish to be with you during this great occasions we admire you a lot. Last but not the least, the occasion is fully-prepared and we promise that you won’t regret for your arrival.

[The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree(晚会), at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.]---第二段部分表达也可以参考这个.

If it is convenient for you, would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come or not? We could be looking forward to the opportunity to benefit from your experience and wisdom.

Yours sincerely,

  Zhang Wei

申请信

申请信写法：  

开头：说明写信目的(申请原因)，信息来源，对所申请工作或学校的认识，自己的打算。  

主体：着重介绍自己的背景(教育情况，工作经历，兴趣爱好，特长等)。求职信先介绍工作经验，要突出个人能力及工作业绩；求学信要重点介绍自己受教育程度。总之，要努力使自己的介绍引起对方的兴趣。 

结尾：表达自己的愿望，如希望得到面试机会等，语气要自信而坚定。

申请 某个职位/岗位/申请参加什么会议/活动/申请奖学金/

Dear Sir or Madam，

　I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ＿＿＿ ( 信息来源 ) of ＿＿＿ ( 信息发布日期 ).

To begin with, I major in secretary and will graduate from Beijing University. I have a good academic performance in school and have been the top five students for four years in my grade. In addition, I am an open-minded, cooperative and ready-to-help girl. What is more, during the last summer vocation, I have worked as a private secretary for a bank manager for about two months. I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position.I would be very grateful if you grant me a personal interview. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ＿＿＿（电话号码） .

I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application favorably and reply at your earliest convenience.

感谢信

写作要点：

第一段：第一句就某事表达感谢

第二段：第一句：回顾事情的经过；第二句：突出最令人感到的细节；第三句：由于您的帮助有什么收获/成功;第四句：如果没有你的帮助不会......；第五句：有机会当面致谢；

第三段：再次表达谢意；尽全力回报对方

感谢一般是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体（党政机关、企事业单位、社会团体等）或个人表示感谢

Dear Xiaoqiang，

I am writing to express our heartfelt thanks for donating a lot of money and food(given more help/made great contributions)to the victims in the earthquake of Si Chuan.

If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid,I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response(unselfish help\the caring donation\the message of donation\rescue\donating blood)that has led to this satisfactory outcome.I hope I will have a chance to 当面感谢，我现在都不知道说什么好了，总之，已经溢于言表了。

Please accept my gratitude ,now and always.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

注意：看一下如果是一个集体，称呼怎么写。

推荐信

写作思路：

第一段：概括说要推荐的内容：I am writing to you to recommend .I have sufficient reasons to introduce this to you and I dare say this is the best I have ever seen.

第二段：叙述推荐的东西的价值，可以从表面和深层两方面来写：This movie/book/city的主题或城市坐落于哪里。What is more, 情节吸引人、里边景色引人入胜。Finally, this movie will definitely change our attitude toward this world and the people around us. We will learn that......

第三段总结句：Therefore I don’t hesitate to recommend this to you. I am sure you will enjoy the...

思考：推荐可以推荐人/电影/美食/某个地方（工作/旅游/美景）/工具/

Dear Sir/Madam,

As Professor of_____,I am very pleased to recommend_____,one of my favorite_____,for his application to your_____.

His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding .What’s more, she loves his job and enjoys working with children. This has won her great popularity among his students.

Therefore,I do not hesitate to recommend him/her() as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.If more information regarding this promising_____is needed,please feel free to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

建议信

写作要点：

第一段：说明写信目的 

第二段：第一句话：好+改进空间（不好+应该解决）；第二句话：我建议如下：第三句话：建议一第四句话：建议二（也可以写建议三如果字数不够）

第三段：第一句话：希望建议被采纳；第二句话：期盼回复

Dear Wangcai，

[I’m very glad to have received your e-mail--如果题目收到某某的来信]。You have asked me for my advice concerning/regarding/on (how to--针对具体某个事情) whether you should study history or computer science at university（用于选择某一个）,and I will try to make some conducive proposals.

First and foremost（首先）, I propose that we should take advantages of physical education classes on our campus, and not only educate students to realize the significance of the classes, but also to encourage students to take an active part in the classes. More importantly,（更重要的是） we should attach importance to the role played by extra-curricular activates. For example, we could plan and organize a large number of such ball games as football games, basketball games and so on.

It’s my honor to share my opinions concerned with you. If you could take my advices into consideration, I will be highly grateful.

Yours sincerely, 
　　 Li Ming 

图表作文（稍微看一下，非重点）

写作思路：

第一段：描述图表。根据之前所讲饼图写作思路，整段内容包含5句话，直观评价、图表主题、主流趋势、最大差异、过渡句。

1. 直观评价。本句比较简单，可以直接用准备的句型，Here is a chart, simple but accurate.

2.图表主题。先将“某高校学生旅行目的调查”译成英语

3.主流趋势。在饼图中，主流趋势指的就是事物的整体与部分的关系，也就是其整体体现

第二段中需要对于第一段中的最大差异这一现象进行原因分析，那么按照之前所讲需要包含关键句和具体原因两部分。

首先，关键句。在这一部分，需要具体点明原因分析的对象，也就是第一段话中的第四句，但是需要注意的是不要全句照抄，而要将意思再用不同的语言表述出来。

其次，具体原因。

第三段中主要就上面分析的这一现象进行趋势预测，

What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that [remarkable(显著的)/some] changes have taken place with regard to(关于) [university graduates’ expected income 毕业生期望薪酬]/[the recruitment of Master of Engineer ]

Based upon the data of the chart(图表) [diagram], one can see the [expected income per month][number][percentage] of [recruitment of ME] has been on a steady rise[decline] all the time. In the year of [1998,图表数据], it [recruitment  number] was only about [3,100 RMB][1%], while within no more than several years, it [ the number][percentage] went up[down] to [2100 RMB0][12%] in [2009]. [At the same time,college graduates’ real income [the number of others] has witnessed slight changes.]

It’s of no difficulty to come up with several, possible factors to account for the trend.Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting from economic growth plays a vital role in less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expenses. Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of their interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time. As a result of such a shift , spending on clothing and recreation increases year by year.

Considering which has been argued so far, we could safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal[abnormal] and acceptable[negative]. Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety. [如果是负面：Accordingly, it is urgent for us to take effective measures to reverse the trend][可选 Therefore, I firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.]

图画情景作文（稍微看下，不是重点）

1，看Directions, 审题  2，看图，先看宏观，再看微观， 3，确认自己主题：支持或反对

2，作文结构 

Para1: 

S1:赞美图画:thought-provoking drawing, attract, attention by, startling originality 

S2:感慨Looking at this drawing, every reader sink into, meditation, upon its implication 

S3:描述 As is shown by the cartoon

S4:解读 Needless to say, this picture is intend to illustrate the gravity of [the current traffic jam]

Para 2: 

S1 :有原因It is of no difficulty ,to put forward, some factors, to account for, above phenomenon 

S2:原因1, To begin with, rapid development of economy, steady improvement of living standards 

S3:举例,Based upon, survey, about 55% of , 

S4,原因2，In addition, we must admit that 

S5:原因3，Finally [Last but not the least],the factor cannot be ignored that 

Para 3: 

S1:评论 Taking into account, what has been argued so for, I’m inclined to view, as ...,abnormal, negative[normal positive]

S1:评论Taking into account, what has been argued so far, I’m inclined to view, as.., abnormal, negative [normal positive] 

S2：预测Accordingly, It is of necessity for the public, to regard it, with too much anxiety. 

模板：This though-provoking drawing will catch every reader’s attention by its startling originality. Looking at the drawing, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation upon its implication. As is shown by the cartoon, [every car, lorry and bus on the road moves at a rather slow speed, even no faster than the grandmotherly women walking nearby with a snail. ][various culture elements, such as Kongfu, Beijing Opera and Laoshe are surprisingly boiled in a hotpot]

Needless to say, this picture is meant to illustrate the gravity of [the current traffic jam][culture integration].   

Its of no difficulty to put forwards some possible factors to account for the phenomenon. At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and the steady improvement of living standards, [论据-a growing number of families are rich enough to afford private cars][there is an increasing demand for various cultural products].According to a recent Internet survey ,about 55%

of [举例 families in the big city have plans for a car][people in big cities are positively in favor of the trend ]. In addition, we must admit that[论据二 thepublic transport system still fails to keep up with the times (与时俱进)]. Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that [论据三 the public have yet to improve their sense of environmental protection][multi-cultural society will make our life rich and colorful].

Considering what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that the phenomenon is normal [/abnormal] and positive[/negative]. Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.[ it is urgent for us to take effective measure to reserve the trend.] [And we firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.] 

求结交踏实，勤奋，孝顺，有上进心，一起

共同奋斗的她

为了表达自己的真诚我对自己做个自我介绍：

我从自己的爱情观，孝观，兴趣观，学习观等几方面简单介绍一下自己。

我的爱情观：

爱情不是靠鲜花和烛光晚餐来维系感情。而是在生活中一句简单的关心问候，记住该记住的，忘记该忘记的。

我所向往的爱情是，我们都不完美，但都愿意为对方改变。

我和你永远要记住：家是讲爱的地方，不是讲理的地方，理一旦讲清楚了，爱也就没有了。

我算挺孝顺的孩子：

我来自农村家庭，父母把我扶养长大特别特别特别的不容易。一个人最大的教养就是懂的感恩。所以我自己不管上学还是工作一般每周必打两个电话给父母，倾听父母诉说家里大大小小的琐事，我只知道父母需要一个倾听者。这就是孝，其实有时候孝很简单。最近经常学理疗养生方面的知识，我希望通过自己的努力：让父母老的慢一点，更健康长寿一点，哪怕一点点。

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爱好：喜欢看书，平常看毛泽东传，周恩来传，曼德拉传，奥黛丽赫本等等希望从伟人历史生活中受到启发。关注一些感情公众号，学习解读自己以后成家该怎么经营婚后生活比恋爱期更甜蜜，更多会关注亲子教育的知识。其实父母和孩子之间最大的问题在于沟通，不是他们不想学习，只是沟通方式不恰当而已。

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以下是学习经历:

高中生活：求学经历:上学比较刻苦，初中就经常看书到晚上十点多，学习方法不佳，导致初三读了两年，高中也一直很勤奋，高三读了两年，三本的分数还是去读了专科，

专科生活:：专科在河北秦皇岛读的，当时对学校比较失望，教学楼和宿舍比较古朴，但是同学都特别好，自己性格内向，不喜欢出去玩，也没有进入社团，大一就把时间花在学习上，每天早晨六点多起床读英语，功夫不负有心人，专科时候一次性通过英语四级和六级。后来想到需要提升自己专业技术能力，就刻苦学习通过层层选拔进入了院的实验室，里面有大二、大三的学长学姐，跟着他们学习，实验室老师对我们要求也挺严格，只要是平常没课周一到周六就必须在实验室学习。自己平常很少出去，大部分在实验室学习自动化方面的知识，学习编程。通过自己的努力在专科大一寒假之前就自己可以动手设计电路板自己编程，记得当时做了一个音乐播放器，可以显示音乐的名称和歌曲名，还可以实现定时闹钟的左右。等到大二开设单片机这门专业课的时候已经学会了这门课，加深对单片机相关知识的理解。等到大二暑假实验室三个人组成一个团队做了一个灭火机器人参加挑战杯的比赛，和本科组一块获得了一等奖。

自己家境贫寒，想通过上学走出一天属于自己的路，所以我上专科报考的时候一定要挑选一个可以升本科的专科院校，所以我一直没有忘了这个目标，专科大三每天花八九个小时在图书馆看书，很顺利考上了一个一本院校。

本科生活:：本科在黑龙江读的，本科课程比较紧，大部分时间在图书馆看书。每天早晨六点多起床在外面亭子读英语，因为考研英语有难度，花大量时间在英语上，虽然外面天气特别冷，还是坚持起早读英语。然后去图书馆做数学，专业课的题目。每天中午吃完饭在图书馆几个凳子并在一起休息一会。晚上也是很晚回宿舍。考研的日子特别辛苦，专科起点学生数学功底太差。专科就学了很薄的一本高等数学上。考研数学有难度，每天大部分时间读英语，看高数教学视频。皇天不负有心人顺利的考上了研究生。

本科和研究生阶段自己开过淘宝店铺挣了部分钱。

寻找可以一起奋斗聊得来的女性朋友。我想给她一个美好的未来。女性非常辛苦，特别重要可以影响家庭三代，为男孩舍弃很多，所以自己坚决不允许让你吃苦受累。目标实现时间自由和金钱自由。非诚勿扰！有意向的请私信我。辛苦了，感谢您的查看。 有意向者可以看下图

如果感觉我还算靠谱，或者有考研或者专升本的问题的同性和异性朋友可以交流您的问题

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