第五学时　Writing

【写作素材】

提示：黑体部分用本单元词汇表达。

1．居里夫人出生于波兰华沙(Warsaw)，年轻时来到巴黎读大学，在这里遇到了她的丈夫皮埃尔·居里(Pierre Curie)。

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答案: Marie Curie was born in Warsaw Poland，she went to attend college in Paris as a young lady，where she met her husband Pierre Curie.

2．他们共同全神贯注于放射性物质的研究，最终发现了镭和钋(polonium)两种放射性元素。1903年，他们获得了诺贝尔物理学奖。

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答案：They were together absorbed in the research into radioactive matter，which led to the discovery of polonium and radium. In 1903，they were given the Nobel Prize for Physics.

3．在丈夫去世后，她继续工作，于1911年获得诺贝尔化学奖。

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答案：After her husband's death，she went on working and won the Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911.

4．居里夫人为科学的发展做出了杰出的贡献，但金钱和名声对她来说毫无意义。

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答案：Marie Curie made great contributions to the development of science，but money and reputation made no sense to her.

【连句成篇】

可选用born短语作状语，定语从句，lead to，but等将以上句子连成一篇短文。

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答案：Born in Warsaw Poland，Marie Curie went to attend college in Paris as a young lady，where she met her husband Pierre Curie.They were together absorbed in the research into radioactive matter，which led to the discovery of polonium and radium.In 1903，they were given the Nobel Prize for Physics.After her husband's death，she went on working and won the Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911.Marie Curie made great contributions to the development of science，but money and reputation made no sense to her.

【短文改错】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Certainly he was right to careful. The Christian Church rejected his theory, said it was against God's idea and people which supported it would be attacked. Yet Copernicus' theory is now the basis in which all our ideas of the universe are built. His theory was replaced the Christian idea of gravity, which says things fell to earth because of God created the earth as the centre of a universe. Copernicus showed this was obvious wrong. Now people can see that there is a direction link between her theory and the work of Isaac Newton, Albert Einstein and Stephen Hawking.

答案: Certainly he was right to careful.The Christian Church rejected his theory, it was against God's idea and people supported it would be attacked.Yet Copernicus' theory is now the basis which all our ideas of the universe are built.His theory w\as replaced the Christian idea of gravity, which things fell to earth because o\f God created the earth as the centre of universe.Copernicus showed this was wrong.Now people can see that there is a direction link between theory and the work of Isaac Newton, Albert Einstein and Stephen Hawking.

►技巧点拨

说服性信函首先要符合信函的格式，其次要具备说服性议论文的特点。一般来说，说服性议论文分四个基本段落：第一段引出话题；第二、三段提出正反两方面的观点，陈述各自理由；第四段总结利弊，表明作者态度。在具体写作中要注意下列几点：

1．话题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥带水。

2．正反对比论据要正确，条理要清楚，语言应准确、精炼。

3．作者的观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可。

4．议论文的主体时态多用一般现在时。

5．尽量避免同一单词、句型的重复使用，多采用同义词、相似结构以使表达多样化。

►常用句式

1．I am writing to express my views concerning...

2．I don't think it is a very good way to...For example，...Worst of all，...

3．In my opinion，it is wrong to...

4．As far as I am concerned，we should...

5．The main disadvantages of...are as follows.First...；Second...；Third...；Finally...

6．I would like to advise you to...

假如你是李华，你的笔友王刚写信告诉你说他打算在高三毕业后放弃高考，到社会上打工谋生。请你用英语给他写一封信，劝说他放弃这一念头并坚持参加高考。

注意：1.词数100左右。

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Wang Gang，

I feel shocked when learning you don't plan to take the college entrance examinations after graduation from senior high school.

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Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

Dear Wang Gang，

I feel shocked when learning you don't plan to take the college entrance examinations after graduation from senior high school.

Maybe it's a good choice for you to find a job and lead a life independently, which can not only reduce the burden of your family but also increase your ability to adapt to society earlier.However, it's not a good idea to give up taking the exams, which, I think, are a golden opportunity for your life.If admitted into a college, you will learn more knowledge and get improved in many ways, which will help you get more chances to live well in the future.Besides, even if you fail in the exams, it will be a valuable experience, from which you can benefit a lot.Thus, I hope sincerely you will take the college entrance examinations anyway.

Best_wishes!__

_Yours，

Li_Hua

高中英语 Unit1 第5学时 Writing练习 新人教版必修5