TOEFL独立写作机经题思路 - 事实类

发布时间:2018-07-01 18:57:52

独立写作机经题思路——事实类

政府类

A or D? Government has done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating.

分析原因,找证据摆事实

拆分政府职能

school education/ social education/ censorship

Disagree:

1、 There is not much relevant information provided in the current school education system.

Having a glimpse of students’ curriculums, there is no subject related to lifestyle or eating habits. Occasionally one or two lectures held by schools instead of governments.

2、 Governments ignore their responsibility of warning against people’s unhealthy habits such as consuming junk food.

set no restriction on the production and sales of junk food.

smoke-free law

3、 Governments do not have strong and powerful surveillance and censorship against illegal advertisements of food and drugs.

Illegal advertisements of food and drugs are still rampant on media, arousing disturbance on people’s lifestyle.

生活类

The rules that the whole society today expects young people to follow and obey are too strict.

in 20 years, people will live a more leisurely life.

分析原因,找证据摆事实

拆分rules

education/ work/ life 场景拆分

Agree:

1、 Students are facing unprecedentedly high academic standard imposed on them.

exam-oriented education is being converted to quality-centric education. confronting endless tests and innumerable competitions and after-school activities to build up their “soft power”.

2、 Jobs today are much more complicated than ever.

not only require a variety of knowledge and skills in different fields, also need employees to adapt to the new environment quickly, including how to relate well to colleagues.

3、 Family life is not an easy topic to young people nowadays.

all the more difficult to find the life partner; the tougher standard of getting married but with less income; have to strike/keep a balance between work and life.

生活类

Advertisements make the products seem better than they really are.

分析原因,找证据摆事实

拆分1: products

clothes/ food/ houses/ transportations tools

拆分2: make better的方式

appearance ( food )

function ( electric home appliances/ medicines )

price ( sales promotion in shopping malls )

无论从哪个方向去拆分,文章重点需围绕“shampaign

sham+campaign

成功类

Those who keep their room clean and tidy are more likely to be successful in the future.

分析原因,找证据摆事实

拆分 to be successful 所需要的qualities

planning and organizing skill + detail-oriented

perseverance

self-responsibility/ independence

Agree:

1、 People need to work out a clear plan before cleaning, prioritizing what to do first.

Do the laundry first, then make the bed, sweep the floor and so on.

2、 People who can routinely clean their rooms exhibit perseverance.

It is easy to clean for just three or four days, but for a long time, it needs one’s persistence.

3、 People constantly cleaning rooms by themselves possess a strong sense of self-responsibility and independence.

deal with tasks independently instead of shirking/evading one’s own duties and being a free rider.

TOEFL独立写作机经题思路 - 事实类

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