高三书面表达教学案例分析

一、教学目的：

通过写一篇提纲式作文，掌握基本的英语书面表达写作技巧，从而提高英语写作能力。

二、教学内容：

英语书面表达:

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息：给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数：120左右。3：参考词汇：门票—entrance fee

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks …….

三、课堂实录：

Teacher :We are going to write an article today.(出示题目) Who can list the writing points?

Student A:

60 percent; shouldn’t receive tickets; public place; build gate ,wall; city image; 40 percent; should receive tickets; don’t be too expensive; pay workers; buy flowers and trees

Student B:

had a discussion; the topic is : should the park receive ticket fee?

Teacher:

You should pay attention to the words and expressions that have been given: Whether an entrance fee should be charged?

Teacher :

Please write your essay.(20 minutes.)

Teacher：写作提示：1.阅读提示。2.要点写全。 3.时态一致。 4.人称一致。

(二十分钟后)

Teacher: Let’s ask some of the students to read their essays.

Student C read his article.

Teacher write some of the typical mistakes on the blackboard：

1.There are 60% students against the idea.→There are 60%students who are against the idea./60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.

2. Park shouldn’t receive entrance fee.→a park should be free of charge./people needn’t buy tickets to enter the park.

3.The money can pay garden workers.→The money can be used to pay the workers./They can use the money to pay gardeners and other workers./They can the gardeners and workers with the money.

Student D read his article.

Students correct his mistakes.

Teacher : Sample version

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What’s ,more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Teacher: Find out some typical sentences and recite them.

Student E:1.Opinion are divided on the question.

Student F:2.People need a place where can rest and enjoy themselves.

StudentG: 3.What’s more,…..

Student H: On the other hand,….

Teacher :Homework

Write another article:

三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：英语学习要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。

注意:1.文章的起始句已给出。

2.词数120左右。

3.参考词汇：基础foundation, 汉语拼音Chinese pinyin

The students of Class 3 had a discussion about Whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood …….

四、分析:

1．学习者分析

本课教学对象是普通中学的学生，英语基础比较差，写作能力更差。虽然在高一、高二的时候，已经进行过一些书面表达的训练，但是效果不够理想。学生拿到题目之后仍然不知如何下笔，即使勉强写出一篇文章出来也是错误百出。虽然中学英语书面表达字数要求不多（120词左右），开放度也不高（情境已经通过中文或图片给出），但由于学生对书面表达构思不够重视，轻视审题，不假思索，信手就写，甚至逐句翻译，致使作文的信息点叠加在一起，句与句之间逻辑联系不紧密，从篇章上来看作文缺乏层次和结构。

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