七年级英语下学期期末复习优秀作文赏析目标试题
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制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
虞城县第一初级中学2021-2021学年七年级英语下学期期末复习
优秀作文赏析 人教新目的版
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
1.【习作要求】
根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连接，符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上;每组英文提示所写的句数不限。
彼得只有五岁，和他的祖母住在一起。一天他的祖母得了重感冒，彼得急得直哭，后来他……
(1 Peter, five
(2 live, grandma
(3 have, cold, worried, cry
(4 idea, find, parents' telephone number, call
(5 news, hurry, home, hospital
【参考范文】
Peter is only five (years old. He lives with his grandma. One day his grandma had a cold. Peter was so worried that he began to cry. Then he had an idea. He found his parents' telephone number and gave them a call. When his parents heard the news, they hurried back home and took Peter's grandma to the hospital.
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
【名师点评】
根据中英文提示可理清需要进展表达的大致情节是：彼得只有五岁，他和他的祖母住在一起，一天他的祖母得了重感冒，他急得直哭。后来有了一个主意，他找到了他父母的 号码，他打 给了他们，当他的父母得知这一消息后迅速地赶回家，把祖母送进。须注意前面介绍的是一般情况用一般如今时，后面表达的是过去发生的事用一般过去时。动词的运用及动词的时态是在进展书面表达时尤其要注意的。
2.【习作要求】
假设你的名字叫王磊，你有一位HY朋友杰克(Jack今年暑假要到来参观，你写信告诉他，你住在南大街65号，从火车站乘10路公一共汽车到历史博物馆下车。到时你将在车站等他。此信写于2021年5月1日。 注意：
(1 数不得少于50个。
(2 求意思完好，语句连接。
【参考范文】
Xi'an, China
May 1st, 2021
Dear Jack: 制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
I'm very glad to hear that you'll come to visit Xi'an this summer holiday. Now I would like to tell you how to get to my house. I live at 65 the South Street, Xi'an. When you arrive in Xi'an by train (or by plane, you can catch (take the No. 10 bus and get off at the History Museum. I'll wait for you there. Yours, Wang Lei
【名师点评】
完成这道书面表达题应从以下几个方面着手考虑：
首先，这道题属于书信文件，所以应注意书信的正确格式。其次从提示的内容来看，主要是说王磊的一位HY朋友杰克于暑假要来参观，王磊写信告诉他行走的道路及到时在车站等他等细节，应采用一般如今时和将来时态来表达。最后，同学们应结合所给的主要内容，用所学过的词(组及句型来完成此文。
参观 visit 今年暑假 this summer holiday 想要 would like to do
到达 get to/arrive at/reach 乘坐公一共汽车 catch/take a bus 下车 get off 等等。
3.【习作要求】
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
看图写话
根据所给图示，以“Wang Lei's Busy Day〞为题，写一篇不少于50字的短文，内容必须符合图意，语意连接，句式标准，字迹工整。(正文第一句已给出
Wang Lei's Busy Day
It was March 8th yesterday.
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制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
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【参考范文】
It was March 8th yesterday. It was Women's Day. Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother. He went shopping and bought much food. Then he cleaned the room. He did his best to do some cooking. When his mother came back after work, she was very happy. Wang Lei was very tired, but he felt pleased. (58个词
【名师点评】
先“看准题意〞：题目是Wang Lei's Busy Day。写作要围绕王雷一天中所繁忙的事情的顺序展开。描绘昨天的事应该用过去时。从题意理解中即可“标准格式〞：本文用记叙文格式去写。再“按点组句〞：
(13月8日为妇女节。→It was Women’s Day.
(2王雷去商店购物。→Wang Lei went shopping and bought much food.
(3王雷清扫卫生。→He cleaned the room.
(4他烧饭。母亲回家很快乐。→He did the cooking. When his mother came back, she was very happy.
完成组句后，“连句成段〞，可加上句子间的衔接句子。如在(1与(2之间可加上Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother.
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日
在最后可再谈王雷一天的感受：He was very tired, but he felt happy.把这些句子连成段后，最后“通篇润色〞。
4.【习作要求】
马虎搞到两张全兴队对国安队的足球比赛入场券。他 通知好友赵华洋，约他放学后在新华公园门口碰头，一起吃晚饭，然后去看球赛。二人在饭店美美吃了一顿，到付账时马虎才发现自己把钱夹忘在了家里，入场券也在他的钱夹中。
【学生习作】
Ma Hu got two tickets of (1 a wonderful football match between Quanxing and Guoan. He was thinking of invite (2 his good friend Zhao Huayang to watch it together. He gave him a call and told him to meet at the gate of Xinhua Park after class and then had dinner (3 together.
They met each other on time and had good dinner (4 in a restaurant. When the waiter brought them the bill. Ma Hu found that he left (5 his wallet at home. The two tickets kept (6 in the wallet, too.(1of在这里不是表示所有关系，所以应把of改成for，表示“用处〞。
(2 